AFTERSHOCK- Official trailer

2013-08-05 1023 0 2 Rating: 3.5

Description

When a trustfund baby finds the girl of his dreams online he hires a specialist to kidnap and deliver her to him. The specialist faces many obstacles along the way and finds that not every job is worth the pay.

Reviews 2

comment
PsychoBoots Said: 2013-08-07 16:26:30
Rating: 3

Title: RUN!!!!!!

Pros: The trailer looks pretty good overall. The shots were varied and had a good sense of pace. The story looks interesting and interested me enough to see what the film is. The quality of the footage looks great.

Cons: Although the trailer was good, there were couple things that stood out to me. First is the actor The guy seemed a bit stale when talking and didn`t seem convincing enough to be menacing. kinda took me out of the trailer. The ending was a bit anti-climatic

Other Thoughts: honestly (and my opinion) i think that you could have ended it on 1:50, take all the stuff after 1:50 and place it somewhere in the middle and end the scene with a huge climax with the girl holding the gun to the guy`s head.

comment
JakeSirianni Said: 2013-08-06 20:28:26
Rating: 4

Title: Nice!

Pros: Love the quality of your camera. I like the professional feeling you put off with this trailer. One of my favorite parts was at 0:54 when the angry dude is pissed. How his figure is on one side of the screen then jumps to the other with a slight tilt, then back. Me gusta.

Cons: The ending title wasn`t matching the feel of the trailer. Kind of anti-climatic.

Other Thoughts: What did you use at 2:05 (the running scene) to keep up with the actor?

About IndieFilmShare
IndieFilmShare is a community for filmmakers to give and get constructive feedback on their films to improve their craft. This can help prepare for film festivals to submit to when looking into the best short film festivals or best film festivals in general. In the future, there will be a short film competition and short film awards for films as well as reviewers. Reviews of films is the most impmortant aspect of IndieFilmShare. This will be an ongoing site function, so be ready for your film to be part of a best shorts competition.
Recent Reviews
Very Interesting

ryanpark2018-09-25

I WANTED IT TO GO OUT WITH A BANG!

CinematicSinger2018-03-22

Little things

b9gi992017-11-07

Review Leader Board (month)
Social