Awesome! 100 ft Rope Swing!

2013-07-06 1025 0 2 Rating: 3.5

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Video of me and some friends having fun and one of the many beautiful and fun places of AZ. Hope you enjoy!

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13colt Said: 2013-07-17 10:30:20
Rating: 4

Title: Review

Pros: Great camera movements and angles. Overall it was entertaining.

Cons: I also think it would have been cooler if it had some dialogue. The music could have been more fitting in my opinion.

Other Thoughts: It was very entertaining and looks like an amazing spot to hang out with friends. You definitely captured the feeling of a fun day.

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Michael Duck Said: 2013-07-06 06:03:43
Rating: 3

Title: Camera Work Display

Pros: Great camera work from the handheld to the steadicam (or equivalent). I think the various camera options you used worked well in the specific situations. The music also worked well for the mood. I also liked the initial establishing shot of the desert.

Cons: I would like to have seen an establishing shot of where the action is taking place. You showed some shots at the end which could have been used more at the beginning to show what the place looks like prior to them going in. I also think a wide angle of the canyon would have been nice to see (if that was even possible to get).

Other Thoughts: I would probably consider this more of a documentary style genre than action, but nicely done.

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