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A cheesy detective solves a mystery
We explain how the Cold War is like a casino!
Reptile from Mortal Kombat has dream and tries to share it with others ,but they ignore him and treat him like crap. He is pushed too far and finally strikes back.
Two men discuss business in they're own 'Private offices'.
Pros: funny concept and AMAZING BLOOD EFFECT
the kid who got shot was freaking funny.
Cons: the suspense sound peaked towards the end. Need a tripod
Other Thoughts: overall good. Revisit this concept in the future.
Title: Who Has the Motive?!?!?
Pros: Good comedy. Good storyline. The actors did a great job. You had some great shots. Awesome fake blood/death.
Cons: The camera was pretty shaky at times. There were a few jump cuts. The audio could have been just a bit louder.
Other Thoughts: I actually wanted the film to be longer. A very nicely made short film.
Title: TRIPOD NEEDED
Pros: Funny story line
Great human outline
Characters where cleverly built, as in decision wise ... left or right hahah
Cons: Should use a tripod or possible stabilise the images
Intro ? Need one of those
Try some colour grading, gives an interesting feel.
Work on getting more shots, if you count the shots in one of your scenes its 1-2 maybe get 1-5 ... makes it visually more interesting.
Other Thoughts: Well done keep up the great work, i can tell your only young but you could beat a lot of my mate who are 16-17 that have horrible story ideas haahha.
Title: THE DETECTING DETECTIVE
Pros: This video is hilarious and wildly entertaining.
Cons: It`s too short.
Other Thoughts: Keep up the good work guys!