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PSA on the dangers of smoking and secondhand smoke
The world is changing for Joey, he needs some redemtion.
The pastor of a small church explores boundaries while in pursuit of keeping his family whole.
Pros: message it`s good, idea is good
Cons: stabilized shots bend the image, some anoying jumps because of that
edit miss some rythm
Pros: I scored high on this because it confused me then it became clear. The message was powerful. Well done. Acting also well done.
Cons: I am not a fan of flat lighting. I would have made the assassination a bit more dramatic in lighting.
Other Thoughts: I would have liked the little girl to have opened her eyes and then see the little girl get smothered. The violence of second hand smoke is more violent than people think. I want the audience to say it was too much. Just my thoughts.