Stolen Banana

2013-07-09 1741 0 1 Rating: 3.0

Description

A roommate goes crazy when is friend Wilson, a banana, goes missing.

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nirvana184 Said: 2013-07-09 00:39:05
Rating: 3

Title: Wiiillsoooooooooon!

Pros: The story was original, to say the least. The beginning was probably the strongest part of the film. Good pacing and good shots throughout the kitchen scene and the actors did a pretty good job.

Cons: The pacing seemed a little off in the second half. Also, some of the shots didn`t quite work. Some of them were a little shaky. The "interrogation" scene`s lighting was a bit off. It was kind of hard to tell what was going on. Lastly, the audio was a bit muffled at times. It wasn`t very often though.

Other Thoughts: Not a bad short film. If some of the small lighting/audio problems were fixed, it would have been a lot better.

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