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A cheesy detective solves a mystery
The barbershop scene from a new Webseries At The Shop
A guy attempts to obtain his Doritos using the Force.
Two men discuss business in they're own 'Private offices'.
Pros: funny concept and AMAZING BLOOD EFFECT
the kid who got shot was freaking funny.
Cons: the suspense sound peaked towards the end. Need a tripod
Other Thoughts: overall good. Revisit this concept in the future.
Title: Who Has the Motive?!?!?
Pros: Good comedy. Good storyline. The actors did a great job. You had some great shots. Awesome fake blood/death.
Cons: The camera was pretty shaky at times. There were a few jump cuts. The audio could have been just a bit louder.
Other Thoughts: I actually wanted the film to be longer. A very nicely made short film.
Title: TRIPOD NEEDED
Pros: Funny story line
Great human outline
Characters where cleverly built, as in decision wise ... left or right hahah
Cons: Should use a tripod or possible stabilise the images
Intro ? Need one of those
Try some colour grading, gives an interesting feel.
Work on getting more shots, if you count the shots in one of your scenes its 1-2 maybe get 1-5 ... makes it visually more interesting.
Other Thoughts: Well done keep up the great work, i can tell your only young but you could beat a lot of my mate who are 16-17 that have horrible story ideas haahha.
Title: THE DETECTING DETECTIVE
Pros: This video is hilarious and wildly entertaining.
Cons: It`s too short.
Other Thoughts: Keep up the good work guys!