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Licorice Zombie

Submitted By: RCstudioz
Description: This is the story of a girl who comes across a mysterious dead body in her house.
Genre: horror
Run Time: 5 minutes
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Sort by: Average rating: 2 / 5Total reviews: 3
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2 Keep Making Stuff by matthewtalamantes
7/19/2013 3:46:56 AM

Pros: Actually making films at your age. (Seriously)

Cons: The number 1 thing is your story. It doesn`t make sense, because why would a girl or anyone find a dead body and just continue to look around their house? I`m not trying to be harsh. I really don`t see why the girl would scream and then look around. Wouldn`t she just run back out the house? Call the cops? It looks like you jumped into shooting without really thinking about if your story made sense and if the characters reaction was realistic. I know characters in horror films make bad choices but for a young girl to not immediately run or continue screaming or do anything other then calmly look around the house seems far fetched even for the horror genre. Again I`m not trying to be mean, I just want to give things to think about.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
2 work on your story by NathanLIONMiguel
7/25/2013 2:14:36 PM

Pros: you have ideas but you should build on them more to make a complete storyline

Cons: poor acting and story doesn`t make a whole lot of sense

Other Thoughts: keep working on it and have fun

Directing:0 Cinematography:0

Editing:0 Acting:0 Sound:0

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
2 Can do much better by MOHORAMAN
8/11/2013 9:57:29 AM

Pros: I liked the setting and general layout of scenes

Cons: there were a lot of continuity jerks and the entire concept wasn`t up to the mark

Other Thoughts: you guys can do much beter...all the best.

Directing:0 Cinematography:0

Editing:0 Acting:0 Sound:0

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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