Amazon.com Widgets

Register

Please enter your details below.

Username
Password
Confirm Password
Email
Security Code
Hide this panel
Hide this panel

Register

Please enter your details below.

Username
Password
Confirm Password
Email
Security Code
Hide this panel

Search Films

Hide this panel
Hide this panel
You have not yet registered   Register  or  Log in
Advanced Film Search
IndieFilmShare
A community of peer reviewers with the purpose of making better filmmakers
First <<  1   >> Last

The Pizza Box

Submitted By: FastFreddy
Description: Our Entry into the 48 hr GFC from last year. Want to do better this year. Our genre was cardboard and we chose to show the dreams of a child mellow in middle age and return in our later years.
Genre: other
Run Time: 5 minutes
Camera Used:
Page Views: 792
Sort by: Average rating: 3 / 5Total reviews: 1
[ Main Page ] [ Login ] [ Register ]
Click here to write a review for this film
3 Well Done with tough subject by michaelduck
7/8/2013 9:07:23 PM

Pros: I thought the way you shot this was very well done. The various camera angles on the child were very nice and flowed quite well. I also liked the color of the shots. If you used some color correction, nice job. If not, you got very lucky and keep color correction in your mind for next time. Your attention to detail was noted. Example being that you actually showed a shuttle lifting off on the TV as the little girl starting speaking of the rocket ship. I love seeing that type of detail. I was extremely impress with the child. She did very well.

Cons: This one is hard to critique the story as the subject you were given made story extremely difficult. You did well with what you had. I did not think the middle age woman portion went as smoothly as the others. It was hard to tell what she was doing. I would not have known if it were not for your description of the film. She did not seem to pay attention to the news or think about the various dreams as a child. She seemed to at the very beginning of her scene as she looked at the box, but not much more from there. The acting of the final woman was also not as well done as the others.

Other Thoughts: Overall, I think you did a good job with the subject you had and think you could really shine with a better one. Nice job and keep up the good work.

Directing:0 Cinematography:0

Editing:0 Acting:0 Sound:0

Click here to write a review for this film
Untitled Document

IndieFilmShare News

Future Winners

Check back often to see changes to the site including prizes awarded to films and reviewers.